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Doc 1 May 28, 2014 DiaryPal

am studying English for many . Firstly, if we speak English, we communicate with many people. When I go abroad, very to speak to people because I know little English. Second, I am a doctor. Understanding English means I can read many papers and books on medical . The reason is that my is from England. His mother cancer. I …

Very different or opposite to intended meaning! E.g. 'I want to saw you every day.' ( = ’あなたを毎日、のこぎりで真っ二つにしたい。)
Problem with spelling or capitalisation, e.g. 'Munday, tuesday'
Problem with punctuation or spacing, e.g. 'I like, apples. pears andbananas.'
Wrong word order, e.g. 'I you love.' > 'I love you.'
Missing word(s), e.g. 'This flower _ beautiful.'
Extra word(s), e.g. 'An elderly old man'
Right word but wrong form, e.g. 'I loving you.' > 'I love you.'
Wrong word(s) (different meaning), e.g. 'Humans have 10 fingers on their feet' ('fingers' > 'toes')
Word doesn't fit with other word(s), e.g. 'on June' > 'in June'
This word not in the dictionary! E.g. 'speaked'
Problem with time, e.g. 'I remembered it tomorrow.'
Problem with number, e.g. 'one friends'
Meaning not clear: teacher is guessing, e.g. 'Go because elephant.' (? 'Get out of the way because an elephant is coming.')
Teacher cannot guess meaning, e.g. 'Happily because now elephant.'

There is a word or phrase that more exactly says what you wanted to say. E.g. 'My best friend has died. I'm not happy.' > 'My best friend has died. I'm devastated.' (Similar to .)
There is a word/phrase that fits better in this phrase/sentence.(Similar to .)
There is a clearer or much simpler way to say this. E.g. 'It is less difficult in my thinking than it was in the previous cases.' > 'It's easier for me now.'
There is a more natural way to say this. E.g. 'I have painfulness of the tooth.' > 'I have a toothache.'
There is a more natural way to say this in modern English. E.g. 'I do love thee.' > 'I love you.'
There is a more conversational way to say this. E.g. 'My physical condition has greatly improved.' > 'I'm much better now.'

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